Coordinated Trials → Enrolled 142 Patients in 8 Months: Clinical
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Clinical-research bullets default to 'supported' or 'coordinated' verbs with no scope. The rewrite names the trial phase, the protocol code, the site count, the enrolment number, and the schedule delta. All five facts are in the candidate's source data — they only need to surface them.
Coordinated the Phase II oncology trial (Protocol ONC-241) across 3 NHS sites — enrolled 142 patients in 8 months, 6 months ahead of the sponsor's target.
What changed and why
- Trial phase (I/II/III), protocol code, indication, site count, enrolment — these five facts make any clinical bullet defensible.
- Schedule delta (6 months ahead of target) is the operational metric sponsors and CROs grade trial coordinators on.
- Banned clinical AI phrases: ensured successful outcomes, supported operations, delivered quality care.
- If the trial was multi-site, ALWAYS quote site count — recruiters know multi-site is harder than single-site coordination.
Recruiter perspective
“Phase II oncology, 3 sites, 142 patients, 6 months ahead. This coordinator can run a real trial.”
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